~`~`~` Dream Land `~`~`~

[Mani16]

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[Pehli``Barish]

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mani ji kafi improvment hai lakin
is main text thora blury hai voh is liye q k
text img say kafi chota hai
jab bhi koi img lia karo text hamesha
is ki hisab say rakha karo na chota na bara

[Mani16]

Re: ~`~`~` Dream Land `~`~`~

O.K Next Time Khiyal Rekhoonga

Or Poetry k Baaray Main ?

mani ji kafi improvment hai lakin
is main text thora blury hai voh is liye q k
text img say kafi chota hai
jab bhi koi img lia karo text hamesha
is ki hisab say rakha karo na chota na bara

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

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v nice

[Mani16]

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Thanks Tamanna G

[sarfraz_qamar]

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poetry bhee acheehaii aorr desighning bheeee

[Mani16]

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Thank You So much Bro,,,

poetry bhee acheehaii aorr desighning bheeee

[Wafa]

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bohot achi nazam likhe hai.........designing bhi kaafi achi ho gaye hai mani......:thmbup:
text stroke dark do tu text theek lagay ga......keep designing....:)

[Mani16]

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Thanks Alot 4 apreciation & Cute Cute Comments of yours

bohot achi nazam likhe hai.........designing bhi kaafi achi ho gaye hai mani......:thmbup:

text stroke dark do tu text theek lagay ga......keep designing....:)

[pari]

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khaab saraab ka lehja hien
khaab azaab ka khayma hien

boht khoobsooorat poetry and
boht soothing designing:)

[abeerhayat]

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bahut shaandaar maani........:rose

[Mani16]

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Thank You so Veary Much PARI G
:)

khaab saraab ka lehja hien

khaab azaab ka khayma hien

boht khoobsooorat poetry and
boht soothing designing:)

[Mani16]

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Thanks Abeer Bhai
:)

bahut shaandaar maani........:rose

[Mind hackeR]

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hmm...!!!
mani bachey tum tu masha ALLAH se kafi achi designing ker ney lag gaye ho...!!!
gud yaar...!!!
abhi bhi kuch khamiyan hain text ki kuch ghaltiyaan yaani imla ki ghaltiyan hain unn ko improve kero aur jald bazi mai type nai kiya kero okz...!!!
khush raho... :)

[Mani16]

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Insha Allha Koshish karoonga

Thanks 4 Apriciat
:)

hmm...!!!

mani bachey tum tu masha ALLAH se kafi achi designing ker ney lag gaye ho...!!!
gud yaar...!!!
abhi bhi kuch khamiyan hain text ki kuch ghaltiyaan yaani imla ki ghaltiyan hain unn ko improve kero aur jald bazi mai type nai kiya kero okz...!!!
khush raho... :)